This Swordsman is Too Steady ~

Yes, the first volume of the Chang'an Rebellion has a few chapters to end.

Personally, I am not very satisfied with the first volume.

First of all, at the beginning, I have committed a common problem with a new author, and left a lot of unpleasant settings.

Then there is the problem of writing. Some readers feel that there is too much nonsense in the text, and it is too long-winded. I admit that, I also reflect on it, and I am trying to streamline the text.

In fact, this problem is because when I was writing, I always wanted to explain everything clearly to everyone. I was afraid that the reader would have doubts. For example, every decision made by the characters in the book, I wanted to explain why he did this. But in fact, in most cases, I don't need to explain it, you know, and even after I explain it, it loses its flavor.

The biggest insight that this gave me is that many times when the author writes a book, he can't write everything. In fact, whether for the reader or for the author, let the reader imagine and figure out some plots for themselves. It is more interesting than the author's comprehensive experience.

The last big problem is the problem of setting.

The settings are done early, but the situation encountered is that some settings should be no problem in my expectation, but after writing dozens of chapters, I suddenly find that they are not suitable.

For example, for the skill of Sky Eye, some people may have noticed that I have basically stopped writing it later, not because I forgot, but because this skill is too buggy.

The first setting of this skill was to save oneself. As long as this skill is there, it means that the disguise of the underworld monk is invisible in front of Lu Qingshan, and there is no Kavin. (Moreover, there are quite a lot of words in the information panel~)

Later, I wrote and found that it was really easy to write, but the story became boring.

I still hope that Lu Qingshan can use his own brain to solve problems instead of relying on this kind of brainless skills, so when I get there, I can only use spring and autumn brushwork and quietly downplay this skill. (Everyone assumes that this skill was deleted by the designer because it was too strong...)

By the way, I would like to explain to you some controversial points in the book.

The first is Lu Qingshan's legendary talent [Natural Sword Type]. Many people think it is too weak to be called a legendary talent.

In fact, in my setting, this talent is really strong and strong, but it is more in the hidden aspect than in the data, but at present, I can only explain this first, because if I continue to talk about it, it will be spoiled. Up.

The power of [Natural Sword Seed] will begin to manifest in the next second volume.

As for the main content of the second volume, careful readers should be able to guess what it is. After all, there are still many hints, and even the crying soul sword is killed by the plot.

The other is the setting of attributes. In a word, attributes are not important. The significance of attributes from the beginning is just to distinguish six professions, so don't worry about why sword repair is a power attribute.

Also, some readers feel that there are too many female characters in the book? In fact, there is no need at all. These female characters are not heroines, but they are plot characters with a female gender. Why should everyone care? I have never seen anyone who complains about too many male characters. When there are more female characters, they will be Tucao.

After all, it is the first book I wrote. In fact, there are still a lot of questions, so I won't repeat them one by one for now.

When I go back and read the previous chapters, I will obviously find that there are many points worthy of correction, ranging from the use of words and sentences to the plot setting.

But this is a good thing in my opinion. After all, I can find the shortcomings before, at least it shows that I am improving.

The next step is to put the book on the shelves. The book will be on the shelves on May 1st, which means it will be on the shelves tomorrow. As usual, I would like to thank the editor in charge for willing to sign my book.

Then I hope everyone can support the subscription if they are able. If you are still a student or don't have enough money, you can understand if you can't order all. Try to support a first order. After all, the first chapter is only a dime.

Finally, let's talk about updates. I have always updated very little. Apart from being lazy and procrastinating, there are indeed objective difficulties.

One is that this is my first book. I have no previous writing experience and I have not been used to the rhythm of writing on the Internet. I am too entangled in writing. I often use words to make sentences and word order and tone for a long time. , Wasted a lot of time.

Second, because I am a graduate, I am faced with trivial matters such as graduation thesis and employment. It is really difficult to concentrate on writing articles. I will face other chores like defense in May and June, so the update may not be fast for the time being. Get up, I apologize to everyone here first, and I will try my best to bring up the update once this time has passed!

In the end, although there are still many problems, I will continue to correct and improve. Thank you for your tolerance and support, bow!

Chapter end