Let me talk about asking for leave first, today and tomorrow, I will ask for a total of two days, to organize later, forgive me,,, the update will start on Thursday,,,
In fact, it is a summary, and it seems that there is nothing to summarize.
Recently, at the end of March and the beginning of April, I have indeed been very busy for a long time because of my personal affairs. Although they are not big things, but they have to do it, which makes people very tired.
Also about the fifth piece, the volume of executors under the red star. Cassia has become a spiritual body, and a character similar to the grandfather's glance is attached to the new character. In fact, it has been there since the book was conceived. (As a digression, there is a main outline of the book. The main line from the beginning to the end is combined by the big plot, and the small plot is written in one part, and then the latter part is conceived in this form.)
In the original idea, Cassia became the role of the grandfather. Personally, I think it should be more interesting. The original idea, the role of this plot: First, it shifts the perspective to the ordinary surgeon, which is regarded as a transition, and it also shows the extent to which an ordinary surgeon can do in such an environment, so as to prepare for the future. The background of world change is foreshadowing—whether an individual or a collective has a limit after all, so someone needs to break this limit before it can continue.
The second is to prepare for Cassia's advancement. In addition, it is more important to further lead to the background of the three-phase continental world, and to let the Knight King class, which has basically never appeared like Perkinz, enter the arena.
But until the end of this volume, I can only say that the original idea was very good, and the passion at the beginning of this volume was indeed there, but it was not handled well.
This feeling has been around since the beginning of this volume. Looking back now, I didn't think about it thoroughly at the time, especially how to deal with Cassia as a grandfather. After writing it, I realized that this was a very huge problem. Because the perspective needs to be fixed on Cassia, even if he leaves, it won't be long. This makes it very difficult to grasp the amount and degree of description between Cassia and Sisia in the actual process of writing.
It's just that if you look at Cassia as a grandfather, and Sisia as the protagonist, it's tantamount to rewriting and starting a book under the current background. So I felt very entangled on the way, and I couldn't find the right limit. In the end, I had to settle for the next best thing, turning this relationship into a cooperation between Cassia and Sisia to write, and I felt a little better personally.
But this is a good attempt. Although the result is a failure in my opinion, I also think I have learned something.
In addition, the new world under the heavy rain in the final volume of the sixth volume is considered to have entered the stage of beginning and ending, and is beginning to move towards the final ending.
It is also a new challenge. I am also evaluating which places need to be written, and which places I cannot grasp well, so I choose to omit them and not describe them in detail.
I feel that I will be better at writing battles between teams in a small area, but when it comes to large-scale battles, there may be places that feel difficult. There is a worry that the relationship between them cannot be explained clearly.
In addition, it is also necessary to balance individual individuals, introduce forces, and how much fighting between groups. Simply put, it is how the individual affects the overall situation, and how the overall situation affects the individual. I really want to describe this mutual influence cycle, but I feel that I will encounter difficulties, and I will think about it recently.
Of course, if readers think that some books describe this kind of thing, you can recommend it to me, so that you can study it seriously. Up to now, I really feel that although I have written a lot, there are still too many things that need to be improved.
Finally, Steel Steam and Flame has been here for almost six years,,,, here, thank you for your support all the time, thank you very much!
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