About the plot:
The two obvious lines in the first volume are intertwined from the "Fight for Hegemony", then collide little by little, and finally erupt.
The growth of Xu Xiaoshou on the open line is naturally needless to say, mainly to talk about the dark line: the development of the world plot.
Take out Xu Xiaoshou. The development of this world is when the "Wind and Clouds Contending for Hegemony" is going on, Sang Lao suddenly returns to the palace, prepares with the Linggong giants, and sets up a big net to wait for the invasion of the "Holy Slave".
"Holy Slave" is here. What came unexpectedly was the first seat of "Holy Slave", which could not be taken by the power of the spiritual palace alone, so I had no choice but to let it go.
With the lessons learned from the past, taking advantage of the turmoil of the White Cave, he caught the message that the "Holy Slave" might come to take away the black scabbard in advance, and Ye Xiaotian sent a letter to the Temple of the Holy Spirit, but the Temple of the Holy Spirit was taken care of.
Only one riverside goose came, and even the masked man couldn't hold it. What's more, the "Holy Slave" was also prepared this time and brought Cenjov.
After missed again, the famous sword was also taken, and his dignity was ruined. The only thing that the spirit palace could keep was a black scabbard.
Yes, without Xu Xiaoshou showing up, I am afraid that even the scabbard will be given to Loray Lei.
This is an indisputable fact, that is, the most primitive attitude that the first volume wants to express. In the face of absolute strength, all struggles are vain and powerless.
And Sang Lao, also with an almost outsider identity and behavior, became the only player in the game.
The formation of from bottom to top is actually Sang Lao's "prison cage theory."
Tian Sang Ling Palace is like a cage. Whether it is Ye Xiaotian, Xiao Qixiu, or moving to the house, the trapped people are weak in the face of real power.
This gray and dark color is not only implicitly reflected in such a large environment, but there are also small descriptions.
Such as Lan Xinzi's unwillingness to servility, everyone's incomprehension of Sang Lao's reckless character, even the apprenticeship with Xu Xiaoshou's helplessness.
After all, at this time, even with gold fingers, Xu Xiaoshou can only be a chess piece, and at best he can jump a little.
is indeed very weak!
The overall style of the first volume is not cool, and it can actually make people feel powerless when reading it. Even if Xu Xiaoshou's wits are frequently used, this kind of gloom is real.
It can be said that if it were not for the protagonist's escape from the character description, the whole of Juan I would be a greater tragedy.
Some people say why Xu Xiaoshou is so crazy, can't he write in the way of normal people?
ahem, I dare to write, do you dare to read it?
About the spray:
The idea of the plot has never been lost. Those screams or something, to be honest, I really enjoyed it when I was writing the book.
Kill Feng Kong and Shao Yishi sprayed a special spray, saying that no one saw or heard such a big movement.
Move your mind, Xu Xiaoshou swallowed a fire in the Goose Lake just so quickly, the man in black rushed to it, it was Sang who stopped it.
I have reminded you of the previous plots, how could you not find it?
play chess, this is!
should have realized that something was wrong!
There is also the innate characteristic "Sharp Light" for the passive technique "Sharpness", which is restrained by Mo Mo's sealing power, which is another big spray.
Brother, have you only played lol?
Some passives can also be sealed. The setting of this book and passive skills are also hierarchical, acquired, innate, and bright!
Passive and strong, you take an acquired level against an innate spiritual skill, even if you barely resist it, what about the master spiritual skill? What about the throne level?
What's more, these are not the key points at all. A person who can restrain the protagonist's golden finger a little, even Sang Lao and the masked person failed to do it, and specially emphasized the small copper furnace, the small copper furnace...
Foreshadowing this is!
The blind spot should have been discovered long ago!
To be honest, I was so angry that I almost ended up explaining it, but I resisted it. After all, it was irresponsible for the readers later.
It's okay to spray something else, it's foreshadowing the plot, there's really no way to explain it!
Of course, saying so much is not for everyone to stop talking, everyone should spray or spray, but pay attention to the tone; if there are any poisonous points, also pay attention to the tone.
Delete words to block one dragon, after all, in my options, there is only one permanent ban! (Not a threat, dog head.jpg)
About passive skills:
Compared to the idea of a long, long story, to be honest, the concept of passive skills is really just a flash of light before the book is published.
Its only function is to make the plot interesting and beautiful, um, that's it.
However, the first volume is only at a simple stage for the development of the passive skills in my conception.
Basic, extended, proficient, special passive skills... There will not be only a few categories, there will be more fun later.
Not only the width is expanded, but also the depth. Every passive technique ~www.mtlnovel.com~ can basically develop a strong thing in the follow-up.
Regarding this, Awakening Pond said that he could not wait.
Xu Xiaoshou has the ability to make money, but the spiritual palace is really small, and the environment prevents him from getting a lot of passive value, so he can only temporarily shelve it.
Damn it.
But the next volume will be out of the palace, Xiao Su is out of the palace, think about it, it is worth looking forward to!
……Ok? Out of the palace? Christine?
呸, leave the palace!
look forward?
There are so many pits that have not been filled in. If you forget, remember to remind me, thank you, although it should be impossible to forget.
About the results:
This book hit the shelves on May 22, and it has been two months now.
The average order is more than 500 on the first day, and the order is almost 2,000 now. I hope it will be a good product soon!
woo woo woo, it's rising slowly, it's obvious that there are so many hot collections, and the daily income is not bad. Someone must have ran to see it secretly.
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