Different Dimension Game ~

The second volume [The Moon of Falsehood] was finally written. It really took a lot of effort!

After confirming it several times, I feel... quite satisfied!

In fact, the first few scripts have some flaws. If I were to give a score, I would only give a score ranging from 70 to 80. The time was really tight, and the pressure of serialization was unprecedented, which resulted in some details being a little off.

The connection between the scripts is not very good.

The detail level of the different world is also a little bit worse, a little less plump!

But the last article "Paradise" has a total of more than 70,000 words. I am still very satisfied with it, and I can score more than 90 points!

It is very difficult to write all the clues of the first few copies and hundreds of thousands of words. The most important thing is to write wonderfully. After all, it is the final climax.

Fortunately, it did!

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1. Satisfied!

2. Dissatisfied!

But the problem comes again. This writing method consumes too much for the author.

The way of throwing out clues at the beginning and then connecting them in series is actually the way of script killing.

And an excellent script kills 60,000 to 70,000 words a year (this is roughly the case in the industry).

A little bit of narcissism, the Qingtian Hospital chapter and the Paradise chapter can all be used as scripts to kill.

(Has anyone bought the copyright? It is estimated that the copyright can be taken away for tens of thousands of dollars. It is very cheap!)

All in all, this book consumes too much energy, so that the daily update volume is less than 6,000 words.

What's more, this way of writing is thankless.

There are too many people who support books (abandoned pits), the high book is already 16,000, the follow-up reading is only more than 1,000, the lowest is only 1,110, and now the climax is only 1,600, it is really a wife Pulled the hip.

(Actually, I always thought this book was good.)

Every time a new dungeon is opened, it will be slashed in half, and it is not broken, but the second chapter will be directly slashed once a new dungeon is opened, which can only be attributed to "raising books".

Keep it, and then give it up.

Since writing the book, I have never seen such a miraculous sign of large-scale book raising.

This way of writing, the experience of chasing books is really bad.

So this is the end of your trip to the rules and weird stories. Next, we will change the way of writing. I have found some interesting ideas, and I hope they can be effective.

There are still a lot of interesting content to come. The "Internet Cafe" will have another incompetent and furious guest, and the story of prehistoric civilization is not over yet.

Old rules, take a day off tomorrow (salted fish salted fish)!

I wish everyone a happy Mid-Autumn Festival!

Regarding the Paradise chapter, a lot of content was left blank, and many notes were not described in detail.

Mr. Xiang Hao's layout did not make it too clear.

I'm not going to make it clear here, it's better to leave it blank.

1. [There are no children here, disorderly entertainment is a common thing here, but I did not see the birth of a child. Women can't bear new life, they don't need it and they don't care. 】

[I need to be vigilant. 】

[There is no mirror, even in the bathroom, you can't find a mirror. But the phone's camera works. 】

[I made a mirror with mercury and looked at myself, but nothing happened...]

2. […he is the wisest person I have ever met. He came here, UU reading www.uukanshu.com and our purpose is not the same. 】

[I asked him, what exactly is Paradise? He avoids answering, seeks out the truth, and may die. 】

[Under the relentless pursuit, he told me an interesting story. 】

[The old lady of a certain family died unexpectedly, and the old man was busy working until late at night before falling asleep. The next day, he woke up and found that there was already a hot breakfast in the kitchen. It was his favorite egg-filled cake. He quickly asked who made the breakfast, and the children shook their heads. The old man squatted down suddenly, tears welling up in his eyes. 】

[After inquiring, I learned that after getting married, the old lady wakes up early every day and goes to work in the fields after making breakfast... After so many years, it has never stopped. 】

[…The old man is looking for life and death, and wants to go after the old lady. At this time, the village head, who was a bit well-informed in the village, stood at the door and whispered, "It's not your old woman who cooks for you." 】

3. […If everyone is a saint, we can easily achieve success. It is so greedy that sacrifice can indeed weaken it. 】

[But it is clear that human nature is self-interested and selfish, heroes are always in the minority, and that kind of plan is impossible to achieve. Therefore, we were defeated in the past. 】

[We came here and revised the plan. 】

[It's not a bad thing to extend the power of the evil soil. 】

4. [It observes human beings, manipulates human beings, and makes people fall into the abyss of desire. 】

[That is an extremely terrifying black hole. Once you fall into it, you will sink completely and you will never be able to survive. 】

[However, it still doesn't understand humans. It does not know that human desires cannot be fully satisfied. 】

[Because of this, it cannot find the last key. 】

Chapter end