Beiyin Great Sage ~

  End of paper testimonials

   One volume of journey, come to an end.

   Next, the story that happened in Hong Zeyu will be updated tomorrow.

   It just so happens that there will be an event starting on May 15th, and there will be a prize draw for 5,000 characters. I will try to update as much as possible tomorrow, so that I can draw another prize.

  According to my experience, the transition between changing maps is very difficult to write.

  Mostly, just mention it in one stroke.

  This volume takes the story of a fragmented world as the transition, and draws out Hong Zeyu's forces as a foreshadowing. It is not bad, and the results have not declined.

  However, there are no violent conflicts in it, and the Ji family, Ye family, and base overlords are less detailed, and they only made the background board, which is a pity.

  After all, time is limited, and a fragmented world is not suitable for too many descriptions.

The key is,

lack of ability.

  Here, by the way, let me introduce my writing philosophy.

  I believe that every writer has his or her own views on writing, and they are different. My views are for reference only, and you can discuss other ideas.

  I personally like to divide a web article into three parts. I read other people's novels from these three aspects, and I also write from these three aspects.

   I have said this many times.

  1. Rhythm: the ability to tell stories.

  2. Anticipation: the ability to arouse readers' emotions.

  3. Sense of substitution: the audience of the work.

  The three complement each other and overlap in some places.

  Here we talk about the sense of substitution.

   For an article to have a sense of substitution, the most common way to write it is to use more words about vision, smell, and taste in the description.

  Like a stone brick.

   can be written as light gray stone bricks with undulating surface and mottled rust.

   This is not just for water characters.

  It is that people must empathize, and it is most effective to start from the place where people can perceive it. It is also easy to empathize with people's five senses in words.

  Of course, if you write too much, you will be suspected of water characters.

  Second.

   Embed emotionally.

  There is a book called "Starting Account Stolen, Recharge 1 Million Backhand". This book uses people's empathy for various things to let readers immerse themselves in it.

  Recommend to take a look.

   Third.

  Describe an attractive world, let people immerse themselves in it, and feel the story from the perspective of the characters in the book.

  I read books from many websites.

  Comparatively speaking, the web content of Qidian is of higher quality.

  In my opinion, it is because many authors of Qidian are creating their own book world with heart, rather than simply pursuing fast-paced coolness.

  Example: Lord of Mysteries, Above the Sky, Inspector attached to reality, etc.

   This is a slow and continuous process. The author needs to spend a lot of pen and ink to describe the world, and even the basic clothing, currency...

  Sometimes, thankless work.

   I remember when I was chasing the Lord of Mysteries, I was amazed at the author's description of the details of the protagonist. The price did not collapse until the end, and it took a lot of effort.

  But many readers feel that it is long-winded and watery.

  It is meaningless to use words to describe bells, crutches, clothes, and roads.

   Actually.

  It is these seemingly meaningless words that make up a real mysterious world that can make people addicted to it.

  A good book is not necessarily a book with good grades.

  As an online writer, a solid code worker, although my grades are not very good, I have been studying hard and striving to make my works better.

  In the first volume of this book, it took more than 20 chapters to lay the groundwork, and only a dozen chapters have the golden finger. It is too procrastinating. In fact, I have considered for a long time whether to add it.

  Add it, and it is likely to get poor grades.

   Today's readers, unlike more than ten years ago, no longer like this kind of long-winded beginning.

   It is better to go directly to the beginning of Jiajinfinger and start from the second volume.

  After thinking about it, I still added it, but I didn't want to regret it. That's why, the testimonial said that after the book's 500,000 words, there might be some achievements.

   Fortunately.

  With your support.

  Unconsciously, I have written more than a thousand words, so I won't be too long-winded. We will talk about the sense of expectation and rhythm later.

at last.

   Ask for votes! !

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