My first chapter;;

Please forgive my mistakes. This is the reason I need practice;;;;;

Now my comments to the story: Wooooow. That guy. That girl. Liked how she handled it XD. But the ending was a bit abrupt, though yes, I know she has to die for things to move on…

X City, in a music cafe. The sounds of a piano flow like water.

Yun Sheng stares at the cheque before her.

She is sitting across a man and a woman. The man has a handsome, natural, and unrestrained appearance. The woman is young and fashionable. In comparison, Yan Yun Sheng who’s body is emitting the scent of herbal medicine appears very out of place.

“Yun Sheng, let’s just break up. This cheque is worth a hundred thousand. It’s for the tuition fees you’ve helped me pay for these past few years,” The man is very well-dressed, and every movement he makes carries along a feeling of a cultured scholar’s aura.

He is Liu Ming Lang, he came from M City and has a doctorate in medicine. He was hired at a high salary in X City’s Number 1 Peoples Hospital.

Looking at Liu Ming Lang’s manner, no one would be able to guess, just a few years ago, he was still just a poor student who had just graduated from medical school. His skills were just average, and he had to rely on his girlfriend Yan Yun Sheng’s support, only then was he able to go study abroad.

After several years of separation, she thought it would be an eternity with her university lover, but what came out of it is only a cheque for a hundred thousand?

A mocking smile emerged on Yan Yun Sheng’s delicate and pretty face.

As if he was stabbed by Yun Sheng’s smile, Liu Ming Lang didn’t allow time for her to open her mouth to refute, and just took the chance to say first: “It’s not me who’s abandoning you after seducing you, it’s because you’re too disappointing. Look at you right now, good or bad, you’re a talented student who graduated from the department of clinical medicine of a famous medical science university, but you don’t have any thoughts on moving upwards, and inherited some little family Chinese medicine clinic instead. Any one of our university schoolmates are doing better than you. You also don’t know how to put on make-up, and you’re a mess from head to toe.”

Bang.

Yun Sheng grabbed the cheque and flung it onto Liu Ming Lang’s face, “If you want to break up, then don’t beat around the bush, and even more so, don’t blacken the name of traditional Chinese medicine. It’s true I don’t have any future prospects, I can’t compare with Qian Wei Wei[1] , the daughter of the Director of the Bureau of Public Health who’s sitting right next to you, who can help you buy houses and cars, and on the way help you obtain a high income job. Liu Ming Lang, you’re just a high class gigolo.”

She already found out about Liu Ming Lang’s actions of throwing away someone for someone else long ago from others’ mouths.

Yun Sheng’s voice has power, her every word is clearly enunciated. Everyone in the music cafe could hear everything very clearly.

This kind of melodramatic scene which only appears in dramas isn’t seen very often. The people in the cafe all look over here with curiosity, pointing and criticizing Liu Ming Lang and the young woman beside him.

Liu Ming Lang’s complexion looks terrible. He hurriedly pulls up his new girlfriend who’s about to act up and leave.

Liu Ming Lang just takes a few of steps then suddenly collapses to the ground. He painfully clutches his abdomen, and sufferingly shoutes out: “It’s……acute appendicitis, Wei Wei……call 112[2].”

Qian Wei Wei is so scared that her complexion turned deathly pale. Where would she have ever seen this kind of thing before, she can’t even utilise her cellphone properly anymore.

The owner of the cafe is clever, after going up and examining him, he helps by calling with the first aid telephone.

It’s currently the peak of when people are going and getting off work, so it would take the ambulance at least twenty minutes or more to get to the cafe, except Liu Ming Lang’s already rolling on the floor in pain.

Yun Sheng looks at this on the side with a cold stare.

“Is there a doctor here who can help give some emergency treatment first?” Waiting for a whole five minutes, Liu Ming Lang’s already so much in pain he was practically going to pass out. Having no other choice, the owner could only ask about in the cafe.

“She……she’s a doctor. She’s Ming Lang’s old schoolmate. I heard her clinical surgery treatment skills were the best in university,” The daughter of an official, Qian Wei Wei finally returned to her senses and points at Yun Sheng.

Liu Ming Lang also thought of this. Covered in sweat, he struggles to climb up to Yan Yun Sheng’s feet, “Yun Sheng, you……know how to alleviate my pain. For the sake of our past……”

“For the sake of money. I can let you hold out until the ambulance arrives. But my medical fees aren’t low. Only offer, five hundred thousand. Whether you want my treatment or not, it’s up to you,” Yun Sheng looks at the man who’s laying on the floor like a dog. This is the man who she loved with all her life in the past.

“You’re insane, five hundred thousand, why don’t you just go snatch it instead,” Qian Wei Wei shouts abusingly.

“Wei Wei, give it to her……if it goes on like this……I’ll get intestinal perforation,” Liu Ming Lang can’t hold on any longer. He himself is a western medicine doctor, so he is very clear that when you encounter this kind of situation, if you don’t hand it properly, the consequences are very serious.

Anything Yun Sheng says or does, she always completes it to the dot. If she says she can do it, then she can definitely accomplish it.

Qian Wei Wei hesitates for a moment, then writes a cheque and passes it to Yan Yun Sheng.

Only after this did Yun Sheng crouch down. You can only see her taking out a pack of needles from the pocket of her jacket. The needles are long and slender, with a millimetre of thickness, and assumes a golden color. However, only experts in acupuncture and moxibustion can use these golden needles.

She put her palm on Liu Ming Lang’s three yin meeting point[3] and the inferior-great-void point[4] . Her actions are natural and smooth, resembling very much like a master’s movements.

Liu Ming Lang is in severe pain, and is already starting to go unconscious. He could only see the side of his ex-girlfriend’s clear and white face.

Yun Sheng’s palm is pressed against his body. He only feels an ice-cold and gentle energy rushing into his body. His body from head to toe instantly feels relieved by a lot.

After Yun Sheng takes her hands away, she suddenly pulls down Liu Ming Lang’s pants.

“What are you doing?” Qian Wei Wei is dissatisfied now.

“Acupuncture,” Yun Sheng casually mentions. On the horizontally projecting part of Liu Ming Lang’s first and second lumbar vertebra, she stabbed in a needle. Only one needle.

“It’s not painful anymore?” Liu Ming Lang sits up, his entire body already drenched in sweat. He astonishingly examines himself all over.

“You’ll still need surgery, I just temporarily relieved your pain,” Yun Sheng packs up the cheque and golden needles. Her expression composed.

One needle and she can make an acute appendicitis patient recover back to normal?

Five hundred thousand for medical fees!

Among the surrounding crowd of citizens, someone suddenly yells out: “You’re the famous X City’s Jade Hand God Needle, Yan One Needle.”

For the past few years, the most famous person in the traditional Chinese medicine world is precisely Yan One Needle. Rumors say her gender is a mystery, she’s quick to appear and then disappear every time, and to treat patients, she only uses one needle, with just that she controls people’s lives and deaths.

She never easily intervenes, but every time she does, her medical fees are exactly five hundred thousand.

Yun Sheng didn’t reply, she leaves the music cafe, only leaving the dumbstruck Liu Ming Lang and Qian Wei Wei behind.

For Yun Sheng’s level of needle manipulation, to alleviate the pain from acute appendicitis, she only needs to use her family’s passed down technique, the secret spirit needle to flush out the acupuncture point, she doesn’t need to use actual needles.

Her last needle was in fact for impairing the kidney. Even if Liu Ming Lang paid five hundred thousand, it won’t change the fact that he can no longer be a man in the future.

Walking out of the cafe, Yun Sheng sent that cheque under an anonymous identity for a disciplinary inspection. She believes that the lead story on the news tomorrow will definitely be very spectacular.

No matter female or male, anyone who offends Yan Yun Sheng, will surely never have a good end.

A taxi coincidentally stops nearby. A man wearing a baseball cap and a black jacket comes out. He hurriedly gets of the car, and bumps into Yun Sheng.

The man doesn’t apologize and just rushes off.

Yun Sheng gets into the taxi. Her tears rush up despite her not wanting it to. She hadn’t noticed that when the man got out of the car he had left behind a black plastic bag.

Nearly ten years of emotions and waiting, but what awaited her was this kind of an ending.

She unconsciously rubs the jade bracelet she’s wearing on her wrist, and says aloud to herself: “Grandfather, could it really be like you said, our Yan family goes against the Heavens by changing destiny by saving too many people, so we’re all fated to die early or spend our lives by ourselves until the death.”

Yun Sheng who is immersed in recalling her memories, hadn’t noticed that the radio in the taxi was broadcasting a news report.

“Urgent notice, recently, X City has been have had many cases of vicious explosions occurring. It is suspected that terrorists are going around to taxis and areas with large crowds and setting up explosives. If any citizens have found any suspicious personnel or unknown black plastic bags, please report it to the police ASAP.”

About five minutes later, a taxi which was just driving along the road suddenly exploded with a “BOOM”. Black smoke billows in the air. It is already definite that the female passenger and the taxi driver won’t be able to be saved no matter what efforts are put in, and died right on the scene.